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-  <p>We scrambled up the ridge and looked down on a large seal colony: all-told there were at least 40 of them including the lil pups! Sometimes it's hard to differentiate them from rocks, so look closely!</p>
+  <p>We scrambled up the ridge and looked down on a large seal colony: all-told there were probably 50 of them including almost a dozen lil pups! Sometimes it's hard to differentiate them from rocks, so look closely. 👀</p>
 
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+  <p>We hung out up there for a while, taking it all in, and we ended up seeing <em>not one but two</em> <span class="fw-bold">fully erect Elephant Seal penises</span>. What a wacky world!</p>
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