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Glasgow | 25-ITP-SEP | Alaa Tagi | Sprint 2 | Book/Library#346
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@Alaa-Tagi Alaa-Tagi commented Dec 7, 2025

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I have made some changes in script.js file to meet the rquirements.

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Can you check if any of this general feedback can help you further improve your code?
https://github.com/cjyuan/Module-Data-Flows/blob/book-library-feedback/debugging/book-library/feedback.md

Doing so can help me speed up the review process. Thanks.

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Alaa-Tagi commented Dec 8, 2025

i fixed HTML,JS and CSS files to match all requirements in this project.

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Code is greatly improved.

Input validation part can still use some improvement.

Comment thread debugging/book-library/script.js Outdated
Comment on lines 30 to 33
if (Number.isNaN(pages) || pages <= 0) {
alert("Page count must be a positive number.");
return;
}
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Some invalid "number of pages" can still pass the check on line 30.

Comment thread debugging/book-library/script.js Outdated
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row.insertCell().textContent = book.title;
row.insertCell().textContent = book.author;
row.insertCell().textContent = book.pages;

changeBut.addEventListener("click", function () {
myLibrary[i].check = !myLibrary[i].check;
const readCell = row.insertCell();
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Can you think of the pros and cons of these two approaches for creating cells within a row?

  • Keeping all the cell creation code in one location, like what the original code does.
  • Scattering the cell creation code across different locations, like what you did.

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I think Keeping all cell creation code in one place make the structure easier to read and maintain, while scattering the code can make each part easier to manage but can also make the table setup less clear.

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All good. Well done!

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