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Bugfixing of book library app.

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Can you check if any of this general feedback can help you further improve your code?
https://github.com/cjyuan/Module-Data-Flows/blob/book-library-feedback/debugging/book-library/feedback.md

Doing so can help me speed up the review process. Thanks.

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HannaOdud commented Dec 10, 2025

Thank you @cjyuan for reminding me about feedback file, it was quite useful. I have applied changes for there.

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The app is not working properly yet. Can you fix the bugs?

Suggestion: Ask an AI to review your code and update your code accordingly but only if you also agree with what the AI suggests.

Comment thread debugging/book-library/script.js Outdated
pages.value == ""
titleDom.value == "" ||
authorDom.value == "" ||
pagesDom.value == 0
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What is the type of the pagesDom.value? Why compare it to 0?

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Changed to ==" "

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} else {
let book = new Book(title.value, title.value, pages.value, check.checked);
library.push(book);
let book = new Book(titleDom.value.trim(), authorDom.value.trim(), pagesDom.value, checkDom.checked);
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The values you used on line 40 are not the values you checked on lines 33-35. A book may end up having an empty string as its title or a negative number as its page count.

A better practice is
Step 1: Sanitised and preprocessed the raw input values and stored the resulting value in some variables.
Step 2; Check the values in the variables
Step 3: If the values are ok, use the values stored in the variables.

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Thanks, I've changed it.

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You cleared all rows in <tbody> but your app is still adding rows to <table> (instead of adding rows to <tbody>. If you add new books to the app, you will see the problem with the current implementation.

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Comment on lines +32 to +34
const title = sanitize(titleDom.value.trim());
const author = sanitize(authorDom.value.trim());
const pages = sanitize(pagesDom.value.trim());
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Why convert the "special characters" in the input?

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Now I used other sanitization. From first example of:

Comment thread debugging/book-library/script.js
} else {
let book = new Book(title.value, title.value, pages.value, check.checked);
library.push(book);
let book = new Book(title, author, pages, checkDom.checked);
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pages is still a string. A value like "3.14" or "3e1" could make past the check on line 38-39.

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Now value converted to integer ( if possible).

Comment thread debugging/book-library/script.js
Comment on lines 78 to +98
let readStatus = "";
if (myLibrary[i].check == false) {
readStatus = "Yes";
} else {
readStatus = "No";
} else {
readStatus = "Yes";
}
changeBut.innerText = readStatus;
changeBut.textContent = readStatus;
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This could be a good opportunity to practice using the ? : conditional operator. Can you rewrite the code on lines 92–98 as a single statement?

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Thanks for advise. Now it refactored.

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Changes look good.

Comment thread debugging/book-library/script.js
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function isValueInteger(value) {
return Number.isInteger(value);
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Could probably just use Number.isInteger() in the if condition directly.

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