Capitalization & grammar updates, along with some helpful clarifications.

[ad08fee3]

I was going through the setup and was inspired to make some grammatical updates to the guide.

While I had it checked out, I did some nit-picky grammar stuff, like capitalizing WinterBreak everywhere, and adding periods to sentences that were commands.

And if I ran into issues while following the guide, I also added clarification so it's easier for others to avoid those same issues.

This isn't really a huge update; just tiny stuff to make it easier to follow 🙂

[penguins184]

It looks okay but some of it feels excessive and you shouldn't have to wait a few minutes for the eips to appear?
It will fail if you don't have a valid internet connection
It shouldn't spontaneously appear after like 2 minutes and 39.25 seconds idk 😭

[ad08fee3]

Not gonna lie I saw this Reddit post years ago and it's lived rent-free in my head since then.

you shouldn't have to wait a few minutes for the eips to appear

That's fair; I only added the If a few minutes have passed and no funky text appears comment because I sat there for way too long before realizing that it didn't work. I could word that differently, to say that it should be pretty immediate, if you'd prefer. At the very least the updated text should still be accurate and help people realize when the process went wrong.

[ad08fee3]

(@polish-penguin-dev I moved this to a new PR: #89 )